This looks like it could have been a really nice drawing but there was way to much going on in one spot. This may have been how you like it and if it is then great but next time try to make something you don't have to stare at for a hour to figure out what it is suposed to be.
This picture looks awsome there is so much detail. You seem to have a anime/ manga style mabe you should consider making web comics and do something with the interesting characters you make.
These look very well done.
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